Once upon a fic
Feb. 8th, 2018 06:00 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
adepslanaeI re-read "The Sun Dies Out" today for the first time in forever.
It's definitely among the fics I wrote that I still wholeheartedly like. I was never too fond of Mahtan, and I like him a little less after several years in fandom, but he's still such a secondary character and doesn't bother me all that much.
I was afraid the story would have more weird turns of phrases than it actually had - I used to write lots of those when I started writing fics, partly due to the influence of my mother tongue and partly because I do like a more florid style.
I did make a few changes here and there for clarity and a (hopefully) better flow of the writing.
The plot/scenario is still OP, the kind of thing I'd like a long drawn-out multi-chapter story for. :')
It's definitely among the fics I wrote that I still wholeheartedly like. I was never too fond of Mahtan, and I like him a little less after several years in fandom, but he's still such a secondary character and doesn't bother me all that much.
I was afraid the story would have more weird turns of phrases than it actually had - I used to write lots of those when I started writing fics, partly due to the influence of my mother tongue and partly because I do like a more florid style.
I did make a few changes here and there for clarity and a (hopefully) better flow of the writing.
The plot/scenario is still OP, the kind of thing I'd like a long drawn-out multi-chapter story for. :')